tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7206328678956334225.post4218866829365619913..comments2022-06-07T09:19:49.927-07:00Comments on Pony Draft: War of Northern AggressionEnigma Sagehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14155922236775012496noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7206328678956334225.post-2282553027307991712011-11-07T06:40:45.871-08:002011-11-07T06:40:45.871-08:00Thank you!Thank you!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7206328678956334225.post-61620703165760131492011-10-30T23:13:56.992-07:002011-10-30T23:13:56.992-07:00I like it so far, I'm a fan of exposition and ...I like it so far, I'm a fan of exposition and history, though. You've already said that you understand that there was probably too much of it, though, so there's really not much left to be said. I enjoyed the wording, and I'm liking where the story's going. I'm looking forward to more.Lennorahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02797535777699306442noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7206328678956334225.post-33422420643270800962011-10-30T17:10:43.616-07:002011-10-30T17:10:43.616-07:00Sorry I haven't got around to reviewing this y...Sorry I haven't got around to reviewing this yet. I'll get to it as soon as I'm free.Enigma Sagehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14155922236775012496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7206328678956334225.post-75224722065334770282011-10-29T13:31:01.686-07:002011-10-29T13:31:01.686-07:00Just as a footnote, this draft is about a month ol...Just as a footnote, this draft is about a month old, and I only just got around to finishing the last paragraph due to work and school. My writing style is very different now, and I do understand a core issue with the draft is that there is too much exposition. Just wanted to throw that out.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com