tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7206328678956334225.post6036232782773089725..comments2022-06-07T09:19:49.927-07:00Comments on Pony Draft: UnmarkedEnigma Sagehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14155922236775012496noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7206328678956334225.post-5405151118042343082012-01-04T17:43:22.510-08:002012-01-04T17:43:22.510-08:00Thank you, thank you!Thank you, thank you!Croswyndhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08874814885847275444noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7206328678956334225.post-1844297554575160262011-12-23T16:26:17.521-08:002011-12-23T16:26:17.521-08:00Congratulations on the Equestria Daily post, Crosw...Congratulations on the Equestria Daily post, Croswynd!Enigma Sagehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14155922236775012496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7206328678956334225.post-11080343504752643792011-11-20T19:34:19.010-08:002011-11-20T19:34:19.010-08:00Something I keep neglecting to bring up in the doc...Something I keep neglecting to bring up in the doc - the beginning of the prologue is vague and doesn't make it clear what's going on. You only mention "the gray unicorn" once, and you never clearly connect him to the italics-narration. Rework that, and you'll have a great prologue.Wisdom Thumbshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17253580014681877939noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7206328678956334225.post-42176356067627392412011-11-19T22:49:39.276-08:002011-11-19T22:49:39.276-08:00All great, though I've told you a hundred time...All great, though I've told you a hundred times before on the doc itself.Sgt. Grubnoreply@blogger.com