tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7206328678956334225.post9090392210634512598..comments2022-06-07T09:19:49.927-07:00Comments on Pony Draft: A Rainbow's BurdenEnigma Sagehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14155922236775012496noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7206328678956334225.post-65706097056361715712011-10-18T10:56:30.409-07:002011-10-18T10:56:30.409-07:00On page 15, just after the ==== break, it refers t...On page 15, just after the ==== break, it refers to "him". Page 21, "secreta" instead of "secretary". Page 42, "were finished" instead of "we're finished" Page 44, "my Dear" should be ", my dear".<br /><br />In general a quite good fic; Luna should probably explain what was so horrific about the other world's power in the ending in which Celestia is petrified. Unless you were planning a sequel.Orange Peelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02010149820098690045noreply@blogger.com