[Normal] [Adventure]
Author: Croswynd
Description: Cutie marks are what defines a pony once they reach their special talent in life. It is who they are, even more so than the names they are given. Yet, Novell has grown to adulthood without a single mark adorning his flank, a pegasus pony with no idea where he fits in Equestria. However, a chance meeting with a particular Professor gives him an opportunity to find out exactly what he's supposed to be and hopefully find a few friends along the way while he's at it!
Prologue/Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Additional Tags: Long, Adventure, Place in Life, Cutie Marks, and fun!
All great, though I've told you a hundred times before on the doc itself.
ReplyDeleteSomething I keep neglecting to bring up in the doc - the beginning of the prologue is vague and doesn't make it clear what's going on. You only mention "the gray unicorn" once, and you never clearly connect him to the italics-narration. Rework that, and you'll have a great prologue.
ReplyDeleteCongratulations on the Equestria Daily post, Croswynd!
ReplyDeleteThank you, thank you!
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